The best thing about your story is your beautiful baby girl! The pictures of her are so cute, I really want to hug her like everyone else! I would like to know more about how you handle all the things that come with single motherhood. You are so inspiring! One thing you should think about adding is your voice to narrate the story. It is already a personal story, but your voice would create an even greater emotional connection between you and your viewers/listeners. Another good thing about your story is the music. It has a nice tempo, and suits the subject well.
The best thing about your story is the pure joy you have gained through the journey of motherhood. You have nicely documented that strong bond for the viewer to be drawn in by. I would also like to know more about how you felt upon giving birth when you thought all hope was lost. This is a key component of your story. One thing you should think about adding is your voice. Not entirely though the video, maybe a few clips. You could add a clip of you reading her a bedtime story at the end to really sum it all up perhaps. Another good thing about your story is the background music and timing of your story. Well done!
-The best thing about your story is the music and the amount of pictures that you were able to use. -I would like to know more about the harder times, it makes the enjoyable times more enjoyable. -One thing you should think about changing is the white text blends in with the pictures on some slides. -Another good thing about your story is how a dream came to life when you never expected it as a possibility.
The best thing about your story is how joyful you are to be a mother. and all of the pictures of your baby girl. I would like to know more about the things you do with your daughter as a mother. One thing you should think about changing is having some voice narration. Another good thing about you story is that you were able to have a baby even when you were expecting that you couldn't. I love that you shared this part of your life with us all.
Shannon, it is plain to see in this wonderful work that you love your daughter and love being a momma... nicely done! I'm not sure what your dramatic question is, but I can tell from the story that a very little person has forever changed your life (and even those around you). I would like for you to explore those changes more... Like my life was headed in one direction one day and then I found out I was pregnant and now it is headed another... adding your voice (or a voice) to the story will give it a more personal touch. This is a great "love story." Thanks for sharing.
The best thing about your story is your beautiful baby girl! The pictures of her are so cute, I really want to hug her like everyone else! I would like to know more about how you handle all the things that come with single motherhood. You are so inspiring! One thing you should think about adding is your voice to narrate the story. It is already a personal story, but your voice would create an even greater emotional connection between you and your viewers/listeners. Another good thing about your story is the music. It has a nice tempo, and suits the subject well.
ReplyDeleteThe best thing about your story is the pure joy you have gained through the journey of motherhood. You have nicely documented that strong bond for the viewer to be drawn in by. I would also like to know more about how you felt upon giving birth when you thought all hope was lost. This is a key component of your story. One thing you should think about adding is your voice. Not entirely though the video, maybe a few clips. You could add a clip of you reading her a bedtime story at the end to really sum it all up perhaps. Another good thing about your story is the background music and timing of your story. Well done!
ReplyDelete-The best thing about your story is the music and the amount of pictures that you were able to use.
ReplyDelete-I would like to know more about the harder times, it makes the enjoyable times more enjoyable.
-One thing you should think about changing is the white text blends in with the pictures on some slides.
-Another good thing about your story is how a dream came to life when you never expected it as a possibility.
The best thing about your story is how joyful you are to be a mother. and all of the pictures of your baby girl.
ReplyDeleteI would like to know more about the things you do with your daughter as a mother.
One thing you should think about changing is having some voice narration.
Another good thing about you story is that you were able to have a baby even when you were expecting that you couldn't. I love that you shared this part of your life with us all.
Shannon, it is plain to see in this wonderful work that you love your daughter and love being a momma... nicely done! I'm not sure what your dramatic question is, but I can tell from the story that a very little person has forever changed your life (and even those around you). I would like for you to explore those changes more... Like my life was headed in one direction one day and then I found out I was pregnant and now it is headed another... adding your voice (or a voice) to the story will give it a more personal touch. This is a great "love story." Thanks for sharing.
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